Today I am going to focus on:
*Using interesting words to join my ideas together. (PERSUASION FEATURE)
*Using subordinate clauses within my paragraphs. (LEVEL 4 to LEVEL 5)
MY WRITING
Ideas
At the Suffolk Lesiure Park there are a variety of facilities including 3 dry ski slopes, tobogganing slope, climbing wall and high ropes course, plus The Lodge Restaurant & Bar.
Next lesson I am going to write about:
Family Fun
Kids Love It!
Thrilling Experience!
Unique Day Out
Outdoor Activities
Learn a New Skill!
Snacks and A La Carte menu available
Fun for individuals as well as groups
Seasonal so please check opening times
Skiing, Snowboarding, Tobogganing, Climbing Wall and High Ropes Course
Suitable for all
All equipment provided
Golf Driving Range
Golf Lessons available
Pro Shop
Structure
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