At the end of this lesson my work will show that...
*I have used descriptive wording (FEATURE)
*I have used connecting words and phrases to make my writing flow (UPLEVELLING FROM 3 to 4)
*Historical Fact as introduction
At Sutton Hoo, on the eve of the Second World War, archaeologists discovered one of the greatest treasures ever found in Britain. It had lain undisturbed for 1,300 years and changed the way we thought about our ancestors. It was the ulimate discovery, the ship burial of an Anglo-Saxon king and his most treasured possessions.
*Interesting facts to tempt the reader
Today, you can walk in the footsteps of royalty around the atmospheric burial mounds and visit our award-winning exhibition with its full-size reconstruction of the burial chamber. The exhibition also displays original Anglo-Saxon treasure on loan from the British Museum.
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